Natalie, I'm hoping you are refining this logo. The stem is too heavy -- as I mentioned to you. While the curved line (stem) doesn't have to look elegant, it should echo thee weights of the type. It's looking too fat / wide. As you add value/shading to the stem, it draws attention from the letters so I suggest keeping this to a minimum. Try it in different increments from shading to no shading (complete "line" art).
I think this is the best yet!
ReplyDeleteNatalie,
ReplyDeleteI'm hoping you are refining this logo. The stem is too heavy -- as I mentioned to you. While the curved line (stem) doesn't have to look elegant, it should echo thee weights of the type. It's looking too fat / wide. As you add value/shading to the stem, it draws attention from the letters so I suggest keeping this to a minimum. Try it in different increments from shading to no shading (complete "line" art).