Hierarchy! The name and Info Meeting are competing and Info meeting doesnt seem well grounded in the ocmposition. The upper type is too close to the clef shape. How about more inviting content? ie Want to become involved with a lively performance group that does x.y. z? (ask your client) I would take the type in Who and What and make this into an interesting typographic design. The where and when are subordinate. Give the type the presence of the swirls. The swirling clef shapes are too dominant because when you are introducing something new, they are meaningless. And you are using your logo as the illustration. If the illustrations addressed "artists in dance, music and somatic practices", they might work but you have to steer clear of cliched icons. Add "new" before non-profit? Have fun with this poster typographically. You've got the space to do it (what's the size?)
Hierarchy! The name and Info Meeting are competing and Info meeting doesnt seem well grounded in the ocmposition. The upper type is too close to the clef shape.
ReplyDeleteHow about more inviting content? ie Want to become involved with a lively performance group that does x.y. z? (ask your client) I would take the type in Who and What and make this into an interesting typographic design. The where and when are subordinate. Give the type the presence of the swirls. The swirling clef shapes are too dominant because when you are introducing something new, they are meaningless. And you are using your logo as the illustration. If the illustrations addressed "artists in dance, music and somatic practices", they might work but you have to steer clear of cliched icons.
Add "new" before non-profit?
Have fun with this poster typographically. You've got the space to do it (what's the size?)